Please watch my play and review my performance (Max Points for answer)?

This is a play entitled "Cowardice, In the face of the Enemy" which is set in World War I and its about 3 Irish mean Patsy Fagan, Benny Fagan (Myself) and Arthur who go to war thinking it will be a great adventure but each of them suffer miserably in battle which ends in two of them dying and one of them injured. It features all the students in my school and the all girl school near by. Please enjoy the story like many did and review my performance and who was your favourite actor :) Maximum points for your honesty :) http://youtu.be/Vk5cu2ceUzU